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Butler's Biography Assignment

The lead section on Octabia E. Butler's wikipedia page is understandable for the most part. I spotted one minor error and in this error the author of this page goes on to say "Butler was one of the best-known women in the field. I believe this sentence should have been more specific, in terms of informing all readers what genre exactly was she the best known for? This particular sentence lacks clearness and can be said in a better way. For instance, instead of saying "best known" the author could have said "Butler was one of the most popular female author who centralized mainly on science fiction." Another significant contribution which should have been added to the lead section of the wikipedia page of the author Octabia E. Butler was all of the awards which aren't noted. There are various details about Butler's identity, life and work which are missing, for instance, the fact that it is not noted that she was 6 feet tall in height.