Talk:Field Deployable Hydrolysis System

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This page reads entirely like a brochure for the system... I'm in sales, and this even sounds salesy to me. Please revise, it's hard to read this way. Fullgamut (talk) 02:53, 17 January 2014 (UTC) fullgamut This template must be substituted.[reply]

So fix it. Toddst1 (talk) 07:07, 17 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

BTW, you can't buy one, so I'm not sure how it could be salesy. Toddst1 (talk) 07:18, 17 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Fair point. But, it's just a format, when you list the positive attributes of something in a seemingly bullet form. "Can be field deployed in .. ", "is self-sufficient", ".. it dices, it slices!". Maybe it's because I'm around it so much that I'm hyper-sensitive -- Tom Waits has a great song called "Step Right Up" that parodies the style, highly recommended. Fullgamut (talk) 14:56, 17 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]