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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by SineBot (talk | contribs) at 11:55, 3 December 2013 (Signing comment by Dnigmonova - ""). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.
  • Dilnoza : Clara, I will leave my feedback on your talk page of your sandbox if you don't mind. But let me know if want me to give my comments on Live article.

Whichever you prefer Dilnoza, thanks! ClaraeFranco (talk) 19:54, 2 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]


  • Dilnoza: Clara, this is very interesting topic. And thank you for raising awareness of obstetric violence. Just few suggestions:
*to divide the first part into subsections? (to make it easier to read for wikipedians)
* to include statistics data: percentage of Obstetric violence by countries? For example, Mexico - 38,1%, Brazil - ..., Venesuella - ... This video might help you: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kZgLJ_MYQmo  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dnigmonova (talk • contribs) 11:54, 3 December 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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