Talk:SMS Jagd

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Review: June 26, 2013.

Military history: Maritime / European / German GA‑class

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Dank (talk · contribs) 17:03, 25 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Review

The toolbox checks out.
"an aviso, of the Imperial German Navy": no comma
"served in the Training Squadron in 1891, as a torpedo boat flotilla leader": no comma
"form": from
"used as a firing platform for torpedo training. She was used in this capacity until she was broken up for scrap": used as a firing platform for torpedo training until she was broken up for scrap
Otherwise:

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:
- Dank (push to talk) 17:45, 25 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks, Dan - you know, the comma overuse thing used to be a hallmark of my bad writing, but I thought I had kicked that particular habit long ago. Guess not as completely as I thought, at any rate. Parsecboy (talk) 16:56, 26 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I've always felt a little uncomfortable in my role as reviewer; I know it's much easier for prose reviewers to see these things than for people who are trying to get everything else right, and I hope writers don't feel like I'm shaming them ... but I suspect that happens. I don't think you have anything to worry about with your writing. - Dank (push to talk) 18:14, 26 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Passed. - Dank (push to talk) 19:41, 26 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]