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Reviewer: ErrantX (talk · contribs) 08:45, 24 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I am happy to review this. Upon a first pass I think it needs a little work to hit GA status, I will leave some comments below and go through the prose later:

  • The lead is very short of an article of this length and does not actually cover very much of the actual article content. See WP:LEAD
  • Similarly, material exists in the lead that does not appear to be covered in the article. So that all needs some work (some sort of introductory section could use most of the lead, and let you rewrite the whole lead).
  • I don't see any reaction/reviews or response, merely technical details. Although fairly new, such coverage should exist - e.g. this example.

I'll place the article on hold for the time being --Errant (chat!) 08:45, 24 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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