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Lede: "Details on its cast and performance are contradictory, although the film is recognised as the first of a long series of ethnic Chinese-produced films in the country". Any reference?
In #Release and reception, but I'll cite as well.
Lede: "It is likely lost." → "It is likely a lost film."
Done
Premise: Wow, very small. Any way of expanding?
I'll take another look, but I don't have high hopes. Pareh had the same issue.
Nothing in Biran or Said; Biran just adds "the film had a simple story and showed a lot of tennis" and Said quotes an earlier work by Biran which says the same thing.
Production: Missing comma before "respectively"
Done.
Production: "General Motors" is missing "(GM)" at the end, as per MOS:ACRO
Not done, as the acronym is not actually used.
References: "Footnotes" and "Bibliography" should be actual sub-sections per MOS:ACCESS.