Talk:Lily van Java/GA1
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 05:01, 23 August 2012 (UTC)
I'll take this one. Cheers, TBrandley 05:01, 23 August 2012 (UTC)
- Infobox: Add actors per production section
- Lede: film. En-dash should be em-dash after that "film"
- Lede: "Details on its cast and performance are contradictory, although the film is recognised as the first of a long series of ethnic Chinese-produced films in the country". Any reference?
- Lede: "It is likely lost." → "It is likely a lost film."
- Premise: Wow, very small. Any way of expanding?
- Production: Missing comma before "respectively"
- Production: "General Motors" is missing "(GM)" at the end, as per MOS:ACRO
- References: "Footnotes" and "Bibliography" should be actual sub-sections per MOS:ACCESS.
Though the article is small, because its lost, its still pretty solid. That's all above. On hold for now. TBrandley 02:21, 24 August 2012 (UTC)