Talk:Problematic integration theory
This article is ordered by introduction, history, concepts, current usage, and reference. It is organized well, but the important words in the theory and the definitions do not link to other sites of Wikipedia. It should include relevant references and citations. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mikagu (talk • contribs) 15:00, 18 October 2011 (UTC)
Good connections between theory and references. Try to incorporate more links within the article to other sites within Wikepedia and then link from those sites back to your article. That will encourage movement back and forth. Turnj (talk) 08:37, 10 December 2011 (UTC)turnj
This is really well done, but I can't help thinking the History section is a bit cut short. Can you discuss more about how the communication field expanded with the introduction of this theory? What ripples were made right away, or did it take time for people to catch on and use the theory in research?--LaRabiosa (talk) 03:33, 13 December 2011 (UTC)
This article has accurate references and good explanations about the theory. I could see you made progress on this. But it will be better to explain more about the history part. (same as Larabiosa)