Talk:I'm with Cupid/GA1
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Reviewer: Starstriker7(Talk) 23:57, 23 June 2011 (UTC)
- I'll take this one on. --Starstriker7(Talk) 23:57, 23 June 2011 (UTC)
Criteria 1a (Prose clear, spelling correct) and 1b (lead, layout, W2W, fiction, list stuff)
Lead
- Valentine's day (capitalize Day)
- "Apu gives his wife "--> gives to his wife?
- "Apu, in order to sabotage" - Remove ", in order"
- "would air on" --> was to air on
- "to be relate to" --> to relate to
- The lead should also discuss stuff from the Cultural references section.
Production
- "Valentine's day" - capitalize Day
- The article says that the episode was created because it aired on Valentine's Day. I'm not quite sure what that means.
- Are you able to specify which the TV series that had an episode that conflicted with this episode's name?
- "He does not believe that copyright issues will arise though:" --> However, he did not believe that copyright issues would arise:
Reception
- The reviews are probably better described as generally positive. Not all the included reviews approved of the episode.
Criterion 2a (All stuff cited, separate ref section)
- The Plath ref should link to page 2.
Criterion 2b (Argue-able stuff is cited)
- In the lead, cite the 7.7 million/48th place tidbit.
Criterion 2c (WP:NOR)
All clear here.