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Reviewer: Starstriker7(Talk) 23:57, 23 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take this one on. --Starstriker7(Talk) 23:57, 23 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria 1a (Prose clear, spelling correct) and 1b (lead, layout, W2W, fiction, list stuff)

Lead

  • Valentine's day (capitalize Day)
  • "Apu gives his wife "--> gives to his wife?
  • "Apu, in order to sabotage" - Remove ", in order"
  • "would air on" --> was to air on
  • "to be relate to" --> to relate to
  • The lead should also discuss stuff from the Cultural references section.

Production

  • "Valentine's day" - capitalize Day
  • The article says that the episode was created because it aired on Valentine's Day. I'm not quite sure what that means.
  • Are you able to specify which the TV series that had an episode that conflicted with this episode's name?
  • "He does not believe that copyright issues will arise though:" --> However, he did not believe that copyright issues would arise:

Reception

  • The reviews are probably better described as generally positive. Not all the included reviews approved of the episode.

Criterion 2a (All stuff cited, separate ref section)

Criterion 2b (Argue-able stuff is cited)

  • In the lead, cite the 7.7 million/48th place tidbit.

Criterion 2c (WP:NOR)

All clear here.