Wikipedia:Cleanup Taskforce/Foundry (electronics)

Foundry model

Wikify
Add an intro paragraph before overview
Cleanup/tone

Added to User:Computerjoe/Desk RJFJR 17:10, 15 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Added to User:RJFJR/Desk in parallel.

Added to User:Canderson7/Desk Compu terjoe 20:40, 9 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Added to User:Phroziac/Desk. Compu terjoe 21:14, 11 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

It now has a intro paragraph (about what a foundry is).

The article has been moved from Foundry (electronics) to foundry model.

I removed the cleanup tag and put the taskforce tag on the main article page. I'm currently working on rewriting. RJFJR 17:23, 23 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I have shuffled things around and change a few words so far. More progress shall be made over next few days. Compu terjoe 18:37, 25 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I've slightly changed the first 3 paragraphs of 'History' Compu terjoe 19:37, 26 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]

A few further changes in the first 5/6 history paragraphs. Compu terjoe 14:13, 27 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I took the first section an older version of this article and put it at Foundry (electronics) and made the redirect to foundry model a part of see also, and marked it tech-stub.

I added an overview section above history, I think it makes sense. I deleted the clean room section (it's now at foundry (electronics) anyways).

I've been fleshing out some of the parts we've been tightening. Hopefully the tension between tightening and expanding will result in good paragraphs. RJFJR 21:31, 28 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I've changed it a little so foundry (electronics) is linked. Compu terjoe 08:18, 2 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I've changed the tone of the paragraph. This is a hefty job and I might assign someone else. Compu terjoe 20:37, 9 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I've changed the first paragraph of history, again! Compu terjoe 21:10, 11 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]