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Good articleIB Diploma Programme has been listed as one of the Social sciences and society good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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unofficial certificates programme

Removed the whole part and replaced it with a simple factual statement. An "unofficial certificates program(me)" not mentioned by the IB apperas the me to be original research. --Candy (talk) 23:16, 28 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

FYI - the article has been nominated for GAN. As the work here was a group effort I'd like to add other editors as co-nominators, but I don't know who is around to add. Those of you still reading, and willing to help take this through the review process, let me know here and I'll add names to the nomination. Cheers. Truthkeeper88 (talk) 14:54, 22 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Am still around and reading :) I can try and help your through. --Candy (talk) 21:12, 22 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Truthkeeper and Candy--I am still lurking and have some time now to help out if you need it. Just let me know what needs to be done. Cheers! La mome (talk) 23:45, 22 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Good to hear from both of you. When the review is opened by a reviewer I'll add co-nominations. Review comments will be posted here to the talk-page. I think it's a good idea to get another set of eyes to this article, and to get some feedback. We'll see what the comments are and then decide what needs to be done. Truthkeeper88 (talk) 12:16, 23 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
TK, okay, I'm in. I'm not around a lot and, when I am, I'm usually doing anti-vandalism work. But I'm happy to help, when possible. Give me another month, though, and I'll have plenty of spare time. ;) Regards, • CinchBug21:36, 25 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
According to Jay Mathews, your information on Harlan Hansen is WRONG. Fix it! —Preceding unsigned comment added by 74.108.21.254 (talk) 10:55, 1 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
This edit [1] in February created a problem with the chronology, recently fixed. Presumably that's what you mean. If not, please be more specific. Truthkeeper88 (talk) 14:47, 1 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Quick update: there's a bit of a backlog at GAN, so I've delisted this for now, but will most likely relist again in a few weeks. Truthkeeper88 (talk) 13:13, 4 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Incorrect History

1964 Reference to Harlan Hansen removed - incorrect as per author of Supertest - Jay Mathews: "As for Harpo, it looks like the Wikipedia guys misread the book. I just looked at that part and it says Harpo and co. got the Ford loan in 67." http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-srv/community/groups/index.html?plckForumPage=ForumDiscussion&plckDiscussionId=Cat:a70e3396-6663-4a8d-ba19-e44939d3c44fForum:5093b309-eb0a-47e2-b777-ea68b9dd478eDiscussion:3111f4d7-129f-4e52-b0cd-a2603a7dda15&plckCurrentPage=1 —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.194.254.7 (talk) 00:31, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • The history is not incorrect. According to the reliable sources that verify the information, ISES was established in 1964 and Harlan Hanson was involved with the establishment of ISES. The sentence you changed does not mention a loan. The loan information is further down the section, because it was secured at the end of 1966, and the information is reliably cited, although not to Mathews. The link you've posted is to a blog, and not considered a reliable source.
  • Moreover, the information you've added about special needs is in this section, to avoid having an overly long table of contents, per WP:TOC. Now it exists in two places, and thus is redundant. Will another editor who watches this article please revert the IP's edits, as I've already reverted once today. Truthkeeper88 (talk) 00:53, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Since I had to revert manually, I think I accidentally switched the order of Hanson and Petersen. If this is a problem, please change it back to the previous order.
Looks like ONY is back at at as an anon IP.Tvor65 (talk) 02:24, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks. Shouldn't make a difference. Will fix if it's a problem.Truthkeeper88 (talk) 02:38, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
In order for something to be "redundant", it must appear in some other location in the article. There is no mention of "special needs" anywhere in the article, therefore it cannot be "redundant". Do you have something against children with special needs, Truthkeeper? Does that make the IBDP look bad if children with disabilities can take it? As to the "blog" - it is Jay Mathews' blog, his post, from the Washington Post, and he is the author of the cite you incorrectly extrapolated from. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.194.254.7 (talk) 12:02, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Do you have something against children with special needs, Truthkeeper? IP, that's not WP:CIVIL. Please comment on contributions, not contributors. TFOWR 12:06, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]
...and note that you are at WP:3RR - discuss your proposed changes, reach a consensus, and then make the change. TFOWR 12:08, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Recent edits

  • So that we're all on the same page, so to speak. According to Peterson, the discussions with the Ford Foundation began in 1964 here on page 22, and the Ford Foundation grant was secured by Hanson and Peterson at the end of 1966 here on page 23. Here on page 22 all Mathews mentions is that the loan was secured but is unclear about the date, with the exception that he got Peterson out of teaching the term at Berkeley in 1967. Turns out, however, according to Peterson term ISES wasn't adopted until 1967, whereas Mathews on page 21 claims it was adopted in 1964, so I may leave it as is for now.
  • As for Special needs - here's the diff showing the information was consolidated, but not eliminated. Truthkeeper88 (talk) 12:59, 28 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:IB Diploma Programme/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Nasty Housecat (talk) 04:35, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    Very well written. No major issues.
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
    The lead is a bit abrupt for an article of this length and detail. It should be expanded to better summarize the article. As a rule, each section should be mentioned in some way.
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    No issues.
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    Well cited.
    C. No original research:
    No issues.
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    Seems very comprehensive.
    B. Focused:
    No issues.
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
    Neutral point of view
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
    No issues.
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    File:IB Diploma Programme hexagon.svg may be a problem. If it is a derivative of a copyrighted work, it is not free. How closely does this reproduction resemble the original?
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
    More images are always nice, but in this case probably too much to ask for.
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
    A nicely written and well-researched article. With some expansion of the lead and resolution of the one image issue cited, this will easily meet the GA criteria. I will put the nomination on hold while these issues are addressed. Clearly meets the GA criteria. Well done!
    • Thanks for the review. I actually thought I'd deleted it from WP:GAN, and haven't done any work on it. This is the product of a number of editors; is it possible to add co-noms?
    • I've deleted the image. Will work on the lead. Truthkeeper88 (talk) 13:42, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Post GA

Just wanted to say congrats to everyone who has worked on this page. It's been an, um, interesting journey, but the fact that this article was promoted really just shows what a solid bunch of editors you guys are. Well done! — HelloAnnyong (say whaaat?!) 16:30, 7 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The list of editors is long and everyone here is entitled to credit for the promotion of this article. I've left boxes on a few editor's pages, but really, anyone who edited here last summer helped bring this article along. In my view it shows what can be achieved despite discussions that filled 9 archives. Yikes! Truthkeeper88 (talk) 20:14, 7 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Shall we tell ONY? 8-) Ewen (talk) 09:59, 8 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Congratulations to everyone. It was a pleasure working with all of you, with the exception of one person. A huge thank you to Truthkeeper who was true to his/her moniker. Best of luck to all of you in your future endeavors, both here and in the real world. Cheers! La mome (talk) 12:44, 12 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I don't know whether anyone is interested, but it would be nice to focus on the other articles in the series. I haven't the time for it, but now that a good example is in place for this article, it shouldn't be too difficult. Thanks LaMome - but most of my many edits here were to fix all the formatting problems and to expand the history section with your help. Truthkeeper88 (talk) 15:12, 12 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, good job comrades on working in lockstep to keep this article as completely and totally biased an advertisement as you possibly can for the IB organization! (Btw, where's the info on Jeffrey Beard's plagiarized speech?) 68.194.249.139 (talk) 18:38, 4 October 2010 (UTC)ONY[reply]
I felt so crushed by ONY's comment that the only thing I can do is this. TFOWR 18:53, 4 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]