Talk:Federal Work-Study Program

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This reads like an advertisement for Federal Work-Study, rather than an encyclopedia article for it.

This focuses on the students' perspective and doesn't talk about employer qualifications, requirements, etc. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.19.40.172 (talk) 06:18, 29 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The beginning is a copy of http://www2.ed.gov/programs/fws/ ; the rest is presumably a copy of some other government publication, but I cannot find it--but it's undoubtedly PD-US-gov so it isn't a copyvio in any case. It obviously needs total rewriting. I am considering speedy deletion under criterion G11, for blatantly promotional articles. But I'm probably not going to do that, or start fixing the article, or even tag it, because it's part of the trial feedback program , Category:Article Feedback Pilot, & ut will be interesting to see what other think of it. (there are a few others in that program pretty much like it, and a few particularly unreadable ones that seem direct copies of the federal register) DGG ( talk ) 19:40, 3 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]