Talk:Lecture Circuit/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: liquidluck✽talk 00:49, 4 April 2010 (UTC)

Other than a few easy-to-fix typos the content looks good, so I only have a few quick concerns:

• What makes these reliable?

• http://www.officetally.com/parks-and-recreation-set-visit/2
• http://www.officetally.com/the-office-highest-rated-episodes-season-5
• http://www.givememyremote.com/remote/2009/02/12/the-office-lecture-circuit-part-ii/

• Write citations in standard casing (not all uppercase)
• Is Dan Goor notable? If not, delink.
• Choose either Late Night with Conan O'Brien or Parks and Recreation for Goor's description. If Parks is more related to The Office, choose that, if not, choose Conan.
• The picture caption says Kalin wrote Lecture Circuit, though the body says she directed it.
• Reception says "heavily criticized by viewers and reveiwers", but I couldn't find viewer reception in the references. Can you point the right ref?

Putting the article on hold until April 7; these shouldn't be too hard to fix. Nice work! liquidluck✽talk 00:49, 4 April 2010 (UTC)