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Copyediting and POV

Please guys. Copyediting what you are adding takes two seconds. Parentheses are bad. Run-on sentences are bad. Actually putting things like Super BOwl in is bad. And most importantly, please do not add POV uncited sentences like changing:

generally featuring the game's MVP

to

The ad generally stars the game's MVP. However, Disney has been loath to pick lesser-known defensive players like Dexter Jackson or Larry Brown when they won MVP honors, instead going with a well-known player such as Brett Favre or Emmitt Smith.

Staxringold 23:17, 6 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]


Capitalization

Shouldn't it be I'm going to Disney World! (lower-case "g")? jengod 00:23, 9 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]

list of people

i don't know if this'd be possible or not, because i don't know if anyone could find it, but could we be able to find a list of people who have said this phrase in an ad? from super bowls and world series and things? {{User:Preschooler.at.heart/sig}} 00:24, 9 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]

...It's the third link in the References section. Staxringold 12:45, 9 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Royce Gracie

I made some changes to the part about Royce Gracie, as the quote was slightly wrong. Also the interviewer did ask him a question, but the original text stated it was a response to 'no particular question'.