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The lead paragraph used the word extent, which to me seems to be suggesting that Informatization is a measure of some kind, perhaps an economic indicator or index. But in the succeeding paragraphs it was defined as a process.

The lead paragraph, particularly the first sentence should capture both meanings if they are both valid. Anyone suggests a reformulation?

I think the word extent is too vague, if it is an index then it should be stated as such but I have not have enough research to say so. Do you think I make sense or am I just quibbling over terms?--Matangdilis (talk) 03:36, 31 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]