Talk:Trajectory optimization

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Rewrite needed

I think that this version of the article still needs a rewrite, as right now it cites no references, and goes from a one-sentence overview into consideration of specific examples, while barely touching on methodology. My suggestion would be something along the lines of the following, broken down by section:

Trajectory optimization is X. It was developed in (timespan) for (applications), and has since been extended for (applications).
Methods used for trajectory optimization are (list). Brief overview of each, linking appropriate math articles (including optimization (mathematics)).
Noteworthy specific cases of trajectory optimization.
References.

I'm open to suggestions. As it stands, I'm not even sure this should be its own article, vs. a redirect to optimization (mathematics). References might change that. --Christopher Thomas 06:47, 20 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I have attempted to make the changes requested. I have more on the way as I look up the references.Mangogirl2 03:16, 2 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]