Talk:Mutated learning object
Wikipedia is NOT a place for essays
Encyclopedia articles do not have an abstract or conclusion section. They have a lead pagragraph summarizing the salient points of the article, sections that describe the subject in more detail with citations, followed optionally by links to other related Wikipedia articles and references.
The article is also about a rather obscure unencyclopedic subject. This article resembles an essay written for school, and as such, has no place in this project. Please clean it up, else propose it for deletion. =Axlq 20:20, 8 July 2007 (UTC)
Wikipedia is NOT a place for essays
This is not an essay, but definitions based on up-to-date empirical research and evidence. I am the author of the referenced article in question (http://www.shawmultimedia.com/edtech_oct_03.html) and hereby release it for publication/circulation on wikipedia.org.
Michael S. Shaw, MSc (ALT)