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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by Attonio (talk | contribs) at 14:59, 7 July 2023 (→Review 2: Reply). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

Review

The article is well-written and easy to read. Furthermore, the argument spreads greatly in the research community. Finally, some issues are present with the first and second references that I need help managing (probably due to a previous revision). I would ask the author to fix them. Isabella Poles (talk) 14:24, 7 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the review, I fixed the problem with the references. Attonio (talk) 14:37, 7 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Review

Many congratulations for the article. Maybe i missed it, but just wanted to suggest to integrate in the model the coronary circulation which is often neglected. 94MC94 (talk) 14:42, 7 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, in the problem presented in the wiki article I have just considered an example, in scientific literature there are examples of models that integrate also the coronary circulation. Attonio (talk) 14:59, 7 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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