Talk:Plan and Execution/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 20:08, 6 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Minor copy changes are all that's needed besides a few other tweaks. 7-day hold to FishandChipper. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 20:23, 6 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

"Plan and Execution" was met with critical acclaim, particularly for its direction, cinematography, score, and on-screen performances, most notably that of Patrick Fabian as Howard. I feel like this sentence just has too many commas. Maybe removing ", particularly" would help?
- Done A person in Georgia (talk) 21:09, 6 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

An expansion of the abbreviation HHM is merited. I come into this article not having watched this series or Breaking Bad, so I don't know what this means (Howard Hamlin Mediators?).
- Done A person in Georgia (talk) 21:10, 6 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Hyphenate "low-priority"
- Done A person in Georgia (talk) 21:10, 6 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
The plot is 312 words, within the length guidelines of MOS:TVPLOT.

Fabian had been aware prior to the filming of the sixth season that his character would have an early exit, but only received word of his character's death about two weeks before filming the episode, remarking that the writers characterized the moment as "a hinge that swings the rest of the season open."
- The first comma is not needed. User:Sammi Brie/Commas in sentences
- The period should be after the quotation mark, as you are quoting a sentence fragment. MOS:INOROUT This also occurs in each of the next two sentences.
Hyphenate "fifth-season" and "sixth-season" as adjectives
Schanuz reiterated that the writers did not plan on having the event of Howard's death as a midseason finale, and maintained that this was a coincidence. Another commas in sentences error; there's also a typo at the start of the sentence.

Images: The Fabian image is freely licensed; the poster has an appropriate NFUR. I would suggest writing alt text for the poster by using |image_alt= in the infobox, as the caption alone does not describe the poster.
Run IABot again (looks like the newest ref was added after archiving). The Rolling Stone coverage is culture, not politics. There is a tweet, which is used as a primary source for a statement by Schnauz.
Earwig flags quotes, quoted reviews, and coincidental formulations ("Better Call Saul and Breaking Bad"). No substantial issues.