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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by SurrealWarrior (talk | contribs) at 14:05, 18 January 2007. The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

1st paragraph

The first paragraph is confusing and horrible to read. DoItAgain 13:25, 19 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

How so? Hyacinth 21:33, 19 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Well, the grammar is bad, the sentences are too long and convoluted and technical terms are not defined clearly and unambiguously. Remember that the general reader will need a clear and simple introduction to the subject. --Tdent 18:01, 17 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I agree. I don't understand the concept and I read it several times over. If I wasn't set on understanding it I wouldhave given up a long time ago.--SurrealWarrior 14:05, 18 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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