User contributions for ~2025-31110-75

11 November 2025

• 18:0218:02, 11 November 2025 diff hist +12 Franklin Graham Rectified two red-letter markup warnings about citations.
• 17:5617:56, 11 November 2025 diff hist +62 Franklin Graham →Evangelistic crusades: Finished adjustments to the subsection headings in this section, and noted the the entire opening of the first subsection lacks credibility due to lack of stated sources, including of a quotation. Adjusted formats of two more awkwardly presented citations (CToday).
• 17:4917:49, 11 November 2025 diff hist −237 Franklin Graham Sources [6] and [7] have been identical for some time; this redundancy recognised and removed. Citation format and third-party issues are general to the article, and so those tags are being moved to top of article. Elevated subsection "Evangelistic crusades" to section status, as it has unique attributes and problems.
• 17:3917:39, 11 November 2025 diff hist +691 Franklin Graham Moved ordination statement into the Ministerial career section. This is a professional accreditation, achieved in a workplace, and it occurred at age 30, and so is out of place in "Early life...". Gave the material on presidential relationships its own subsection neading, because it takes the section on a turn that is no longer chronological. Note, neither the substantial autobiographical content that opens that section nor its reliance on BG/BGEA autobio content comply with WP:INDEPENDENT. Tag: possible unreferenced addition to BLP
• 17:2017:20, 11 November 2025 diff hist +3,885 Franklin Graham →Early life and education: 1, Copy edits. i, Faulty parallelism in conjunctive phrase "...A and B."—both must match number of plural subjject (A, B both plural). ii, Removed unnecessary comma in the series. 2, Completed 3 title subject (FG)-dependent citations. Note, citing webpages of FG-led organisations to speak about FG or his father ("one of the world's most renowned") violates WP:NPOV, WP:INDY policies. Third-party sources are a MUST—and with surpassing claims, more than one.

9 November 2025

• 10:0610:06, 9 November 2025 diff hist +318 Jacques Mering Review of Awards and recognition section revealed, again, that end of paragraph citation only covers the final sentence of that paragraph and section. Tags added, accordingly. Verification called for in the opening block of the Career section, because in all other cases examined thus far in this article, large blocks of content ending with a source overstate the coverage of that source. (Every time.)
• 09:4309:43, 9 November 2025 diff hist +899 Jacques Mering →Personal life: Completed the Wilmut citation, making clear he was summarising and reviewing Brenda Maddux's book. Further edits to source made (e.g., "never divorced" out as unsupported by WIlmut content).
• 09:2409:24, 9 November 2025 diff hist +203 Jacques Mering →Personal life: Apologies, these corrections seem never to end, but everywhere one turns here... This edit, corrected Personal life content to Wilmut citation, which only says about ½ of content earlier attributed. Added a bit more actually said from Wilmut. Note, sad state of sourcing of this article suggests either unrecognised editorial inexperience, or that they've faced near impossible task of adding citations to a work unsourced, en masse, at the start. Either way, a shambles, still.
• 09:0409:04, 9 November 2025 diff hist −238 Jacques Mering →Personal life: Note, this is not addition of material without citation, whatever the bots might say—the source presented simply did not support the sentences it follows, so it is moved to Further reading, and {{cn}} tags are placed in that text as needed. Tag: references removed
• 09:0209:02, 9 November 2025 diff hist +353 Jacques Mering →References: Added a Further reading section; see also next edit summary, which will complete the edit.
• 08:4608:46, 9 November 2025 diff hist +18 Jacques Mering Copy edit. 1, Corrected the URL to the title element presented in the citation. 2, Awkward construction. (Corrected.) 3, Moved {{cnl}} tag to end of that sentence. (Some sentence elements are not yet assigned to an appearing main body source.0
• 08:3608:36, 9 November 2025 diff hist +16 Jacques Mering Copy edit. Clarified span of a stated position.
• 08:3408:34, 9 November 2025 diff hist +136 Jacques Mering Made lead consistent with regard to stating French institutional names, both in French and in translation, with the addition of a translation of Centre de Recherche sur les Solides à Organization Cristalline Imparfaite in the lead. Note, last edit also added Brenda Maddox's J.D. Bernal quote as a footnote to the last sentence of the lead.
• 08:2608:26, 9 November 2025 diff hist −2 Jacques Mering Copy edit. Revised elaboration on CNRS abbreviation making clear it contains no actual overt reference to France. See diff before worrying.
• 08:2208:22, 9 November 2025 diff hist +1,367 Jacques Mering Made date formats consistent via {{use dmy... markup. Added Wyart citation to lead, and removed a {{cn}} tag. Made clear, DOB, place of death, etc., not yet sourced. Corrected opening lead sentence to only appearing inline citation. Moved sections closer to WP standards. Indicated through redaction, that we don't believe his military conscription is worth re-statement in lead; opportunity cost is high, other things ought be considered first.
• 07:0807:08, 9 November 2025 diff hist +530 Jacques Mering Noting Brindley citation has but 1 sentence on Mering: "[I]n 1974 [Jose J. Fripia] was appointed director of the C.N.R.S. Centre de Recherche sur les Solides à Organization Cristalline Imparfaite, at Orléans, France, the position occupied previously by Jacques Mering who also was a member of our society." As such, Brindley is valid citation only in 1 place, so 2 further places it appeared—where irrelevant—it's now hidden from view, {{cn}} tags placed. Moved ½ lead Franklin material to footnote.
• 06:3906:39, 9 November 2025 diff hist +187 Jacques Mering →Biography: Not all of the content of these closing sentences of this first pragraph are in the terminal source. Last sentence corrected, two prior tagged.

8 November 2025

• 23:4923:49, 8 November 2025 diff hist +669 Southern Preparatory Academy →Athletics: Combined subsections that are too articulated (one and two-sentence subsections). Removed the nonstandard "Source:^[5]" text, and placed the citation in the way it's usually done at WP. That makes it possible to add sentences from other sources without complication, and makes clear the real issues with the section—all the content is first-party, and therefore not broad enough, and NPOV-questionable.
• 23:3623:36, 8 November 2025 diff hist +47 Southern Preparatory Academy →Student Life: Calling attention to a clear defect in section, see last edit summary.
• 23:3423:34, 8 November 2025 diff hist +25 Southern Preparatory Academy →Academics: In addition to serving WP internally allowing us to list all secitons needing attention), tags of sections and articles serve other purposes. A critical one is to alert readers as to deficiencies of content that they are reading, so they can approach clearly defective sections with caution. Important defects include sources being too close to the subject (last section, a WP:NPOV issue), and section having no sources at all (this section, a WP:VERIFY issue).
• 23:2923:29, 8 November 2025 diff hist −16 Southern Preparatory Academy →Tuition: Adjusting the section tag to reflect recent edits.
• 19:0619:06, 8 November 2025 diff hist +50 List of Christian preachers →Puritan: Campbell Morgan and Lloyd-Jones were not Puritans, by any means/definition current

7 November 2025

• 21:0021:00, 7 November 2025 diff hist +82 D. John Sauer →Early life and education: Noting statements unsupported by citations.
• 07:3507:35, 7 November 2025 diff hist +334 Talk:Jesus People USA →Apology published! current
• 07:3107:31, 7 November 2025 diff hist +2,517 Talk:Jesus People USA →Here is the Chicago Tribune extract we as academics viewed as near enough to plagiarism: new section Tag: New topic
• 07:0107:01, 7 November 2025 diff hist +650 Jesus People USA →Enroth controversy: Addressed what is near enough to plagiarism, so close is the paraphrase of the appearing 1 April Chicago Tribune article to the text that appears here. Issue resolved by blockquoting the original cribbed text. (Compare via diff.) If the block quote is to be removed, the content should be *thoroughly* rewritten, and not just modified with the addition of a word or two in places.
• 06:3306:33, 7 November 2025 diff hist +2,583 Jesus People USA Addressed source issues in lead. Added Miller (1999) as new lead source. Completed/repaired 5 citations, checked lead content against. Unsupported content now has {{cn}}-type tags. Citation review revealed citation misuse—appearing to cover lead content when they just don't. Most lead content is, as of this date, (i) novel to the lead rather than summarising the article, and (ii) not attributable to any appearing source. [As such, lead/article violates WP:LEAD, WP:VERIFY, WP:OR.]
• 00:1100:11, 7 November 2025 diff hist +18 J. D. Greear Making date formats uniform via {{use mdy... markup.

6 November 2025

• 09:2909:29, 6 November 2025 diff hist +771 Gigi Graham Made the list of her siblings complete, in the main body and in the infobox, from the Martin biography.
• 09:0909:09, 6 November 2025 diff hist +101 Ruth Graham →Early life: Completed and corrected the LATime obit citation. current
• 08:5908:59, 6 November 2025 diff hist +128 Gigi Graham Made Spouse field of infobox ccnsistent with the article text, and added a source or sources for each spouses.
• 08:5508:55, 6 November 2025 diff hist +1 Gigi Graham Completing last copy edit.
• 08:5108:51, 6 November 2025 diff hist +17 Gigi Graham Copy edit. Added page numbers to Neff citation.
• 08:4908:49, 6 November 2025 diff hist +18 Gigi Graham Made markup-generated dates uniform via {{use mdy... markup.
• 08:4308:43, 6 November 2025 diff hist +8,259 Gigi Graham Note, no new content added w/o citation. But, bec. material was moved about to begin resolving article issues—esp., non-compliance with WP:VERIFY, WP:LEAD—moved content, already unsourced, now bears {{citation needed}} tags. Specific edits: Added Martin bio Early life content. Created std WP sections, populating with old/new content. Changed Bibliography § to Published works, converted 4 entries to {{cite book... markup to start that conversion (of article to std formats, presentations). Tags: possible BLP issue or vandalism Disambiguation links added
• 06:2606:26, 6 November 2025 diff hist +1,024 GRACE (organization) →History: Converted the Joyce-American Prospect and Pease WashPo citations—rest of citations, this section—to {{cite magazine/news... formats, and completed them. Text remains to be checked against these three sources. (Extracted content appears to be fairly freewheeling, so this check, by a registered editor, is encouraged.)

5 November 2025

• 01:2301:23, 5 November 2025 diff hist +11 Liz Cheney →Conspiracy theories: Adjusting section title to better reflect section content.
• 01:2201:22, 5 November 2025 diff hist −1 Liz Cheney →Conspiracy theories: Moved a sentence that eliminated two single sentence paragraphs, and that improved balance of section opening.
• 01:2001:20, 5 November 2025 diff hist 0 Liz Cheney →Conspiracy theories: Copy edit. Corrected misspelling.
• 01:2001:20, 5 November 2025 diff hist +82 Liz Cheney →Conspiracy theories: Elaborated on opening sentence, adding content from source cited, clarifying why readers should care what Goodall has said about the title subject. In doing this review to undertand, we concluded that Goodall source is not neutral, and further work/sources should be added to balance perspective. (Politically, Goodall is on other end of spectrum from Cheney, so it's understandable they will make statements opposing Cheney; their doing so does not make it encyclopedic.)
• 01:1101:11, 5 November 2025 diff hist +139 Bud Goodall Addressing longstanding issues of unsourced content violating WP:VERIFY, and what appears to be WP:NPOV issues related to edititors too close to the title subject, writing from what they know, instead of sources. No non-sky-is-blue-content should appear wihtout source. (We do not add {{cn}} tages in every section, paragraph, and sentence where they are missing, but consider it all challenged, esp. content exopressing interpretation / perspective.

4 November 2025

• 20:4020:40, 4 November 2025 diff hist −1 User talk:Smokefoot →Thank you current
• 20:3920:39, 4 November 2025 diff hist +574 User talk:Smokefoot →Thank you
• 20:2520:25, 4 November 2025 diff hist +2,103 User talk:Smokefoot →What's the deal with the tetrachloroethylene page?
• 10:2110:21, 4 November 2025 diff hist +99 Potassium peroxymonosulfate →Preparative chemistry: Reordered the paragraph, moving up the epoxidations, and moving down the heteroatom oxidations and the organic-soluble derivatives description, as a prelude to a review with regard to section focus, aiming for a text that more clearly "majors in the majors".
• 10:1310:13, 4 November 2025 diff hist +1,715 Potassium peroxymonosulfate →Preparative chemistry: Developed the sulfur, nitrogen, phosphorus paragraph from the Crandall source, correcting it as necessary, and adding selenium, and removed the {{cn}} tag that appeared earlier. Note, the McCarthy-Matthews-Paolini Org. Synth. citation failed verification with regard to the sulfoxide claim, but provided a source for the scheme that followed.
• 09:2109:21, 4 November 2025 diff hist +167 Potassium peroxymonosulfate Moved Mundy to its proper chronological place in the section, and added URL and ISBN.
• 09:1009:10, 4 November 2025 diff hist +1,224 Potassium peroxymonosulfate →Triple salt formulations (Oxone®, etc.): Removed unsourced information regarding amount of active ingredient in the Oxone formulations, and replaced it with information from DuPont (2008) and Crandall et al. (2012).
• 09:0409:04, 4 November 2025 diff hist +319 Potassium peroxymonosulfate →Further reading: Added the Oxone entry in Mundy et al (2005) to Further reading.