User contributions for VenerableTurtle
A user with 43 edits. Account created on 10 April 2025.
12 June 2025
- 05:3005:30, 12 June 2025 diff hist +9,324 Cleon copied from sandbox User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon Tag: Visual edit
- 05:2605:26, 12 June 2025 diff hist +2 m User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon small revision in lead current Tag: Visual edit
- 05:2305:23, 12 June 2025 diff hist −58 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon final revisions Tag: Visual edit
- 05:1205:12, 12 June 2025 diff hist −174 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon removed unsubstantiated claim Tag: Visual edit
- 05:1105:11, 12 June 2025 diff hist +503 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon added citation for Pericles' death Tag: Visual edit
- 04:4704:47, 12 June 2025 diff hist −1 m User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon typo Tag: Visual edit
- 04:4604:46, 12 June 2025 diff hist +150 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon added citation to claim that Cleon attacked Pericles for his tactics Tag: Visual edit
- 04:3704:37, 12 June 2025 diff hist +159 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon Fixed references fully, removed unreferenced works, added all works in notes, removed redundant citation, removed citation lacking page number Tag: Visual edit
- 04:2904:29, 12 June 2025 diff hist +211 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon Fixing references Tag: Visual edit
- 04:0904:09, 12 June 2025 diff hist −298 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon Fixing references Tag: Visual edit
- 03:2703:27, 12 June 2025 diff hist +26 m User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon added link to Demosthenes Tag: Visual edit
- 03:2603:26, 12 June 2025 diff hist −93 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon added citations where needed, removed redundant citation, fixed citations Tag: Visual edit
- 03:0103:01, 12 June 2025 diff hist −17 m User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon consistency with numbering Tag: Visual edit
- 02:5902:59, 12 June 2025 diff hist −11 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon final revision of Historical interpreatations section Tag: Visual edit
- 02:5002:50, 12 June 2025 diff hist +129 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon added detail that Cleon was ridiculed in many of Aristophanes plays Tag: Visual edit
- 02:4602:46, 12 June 2025 diff hist +677 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon remade section regarding Thucydides and Aristophanes negative depictions of Cleon Tag: Visual edit
- 01:3501:35, 12 June 2025 diff hist −21 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon removed popular support and appeal sub-section, added Role in Peloponnesian war sub-section, added Mytilene revolt and debate, Battle of Pylos and Sphacteria, and Battle of Amphilipolis and death sub-sub sections Tag: Visual edit
- 01:2501:25, 12 June 2025 diff hist +651 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon final revision to lead section, Tag: Visual edit
- 00:5700:57, 12 June 2025 diff hist +1,078 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon added Nikolaidis segment to Modern Assessment Tag: Visual edit
- 00:3600:36, 12 June 2025 diff hist −50 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon moved detail regarding tribute to more fitting section Tag: Visual edit
- 00:3400:34, 12 June 2025 diff hist +1,495 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon added further details regarding Sphacteria and Cleon's assumption of command Tag: Visual edit
- 00:1300:13, 12 June 2025 diff hist +729 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon details regarding Mytilene debate Tag: Visual edit
- 00:0100:01, 12 June 2025 diff hist +512 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon added citation for Mytilene revolt Tag: Visual edit
11 June 2025
- 22:4622:46, 11 June 2025 diff hist +837 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon Added details regarding buildup to Battle of Sphacteria Tag: Visual edit
- 22:3922:39, 11 June 2025 diff hist +573 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 22:0222:02, 11 June 2025 diff hist +36 m User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon Fixed citations Tag: Visual edit
- 22:0122:01, 11 June 2025 diff hist +1,935 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon Hershkowitz and Foster segements added to Modern Assessement subsection Tag: Visual edit
- 20:4120:41, 11 June 2025 diff hist +5,486 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon Renamed and reorganized Aristophanes and Thucydides on Cleon section. Further revised lead section for clarity as well as correcting a incorrect claim regarding his family background Tag: Visual edit
31 May 2025
- 06:5106:51, 31 May 2025 diff hist +3,436 N User:Icemig28/Trierarchy/VenerableTurtle Peer Review Peer Review Comments current Tag: Visual edit
- 06:1006:10, 31 May 2025 diff hist +4,520 N User:Bronsok/Ephialtes/VenerableTurtle Peer Review Peer Review Comments current Tag: Visual edit
23 May 2025
- 22:0922:09, 23 May 2025 diff hist +561 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon added maps of Peloponnesian war and location map featuring Amphipolis, Athens, Mytilene, and Sphacteria Tag: Visual edit
- 21:4721:47, 23 May 2025 diff hist +2,780 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon renamed War against Sparta, subsuqent death sub-section to War with Sparta and Death. Revised sub-section for tone, clarity and flow Tag: Visual edit
- 21:0821:08, 23 May 2025 diff hist +1,901 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon renamed Opposition to Pericles sub-section to Rise to Power, and Rise in popularity to Political Prominence and Popular Appeal. Moved relevant information from Political Prominence... to Rise to Power. Revised Political Prominence... sub-section for tone, clarity, and flow Tag: Visual edit
- 20:2020:20, 23 May 2025 diff hist +1,268 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon revised Opposition to Pericles section for clarity, tone, and structure Tag: Visual edit
- 19:5719:57, 23 May 2025 diff hist +9 m User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 19:5519:55, 23 May 2025 diff hist +69 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon added clarification regarding information of his personal life Tag: Visual edit
- 19:4719:47, 23 May 2025 diff hist +610 User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon added image to infobox. Changed BC to BCE Tag: Visual edit
- 19:1519:15, 23 May 2025 diff hist +4,117 N User:VenerableTurtle/Cleon revised header to improve flow, remove non-neutral phrases such as "remembered for being ruthless," as well as balances mention of negative historical portrayal with reference to modern debates over its accuracy Tag: Visual edit
12 April 2025
- 03:5903:59, 12 April 2025 diff hist +2,653 N User:VenerableTurtle/Evaluate an Article ←Created page with '{{dashboard.wikiedu.org evaluate article/guide}} == Which article are you evaluating? == (Provide a link to the article here.) == Why you have chosen this article to evaluate? == (Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.) == Evaluate the article == Lead Section: The lead section mostly follows the guidelines except that it doesn't provide an overview for all the major sections such as his role...' current Tag: Visual edit
11 April 2025
- 18:0918:09, 11 April 2025 diff hist +40 Wikipedia:Wiki Ed/Western Washington University/History of Ancient Greece (Spring 2025) Updating course from dashboard.wikiedu.org Tag: dashboard.wikiedu.org [2.3]
- 18:0918:09, 11 April 2025 diff hist +33 N User:VenerableTurtle/sandbox adding {{dashboard.wikiedu.org sandbox}} current Tag: dashboard.wikiedu.org [2.3]
- 18:0918:09, 11 April 2025 diff hist +225 N User talk:VenerableTurtle adding {{dashboard.wikiedu.org talk course link}} Tag: dashboard.wikiedu.org [2.3]
- 18:0918:09, 11 April 2025 diff hist +223 N User:VenerableTurtle User has enrolled in Wikipedia:Wiki_Ed/Western_Washington_University/History_of_Ancient_Greece_(Spring_2025). current Tag: dashboard.wikiedu.org [2.3]
